Im liking the fire, a bit sharper would be nice. If the thing in the middle is a human, it has major anatomical problems, plus, it should have very bright and solid highlights all over the body. When doing that, you should show pain in his expression and maybe burn marks throughought the epidermis.
I havent gotten to the guy in the middle... and I was thinking of having him soot covered and very dirty so he would be quite dark and have firelight reflecting here and there. Basicly I was going for fire=brightest, man=mid-dark, and the surrounding areas to be pretty much black. And I am not too worried about any anatomical probs because he will be hard to see anyways and hardly the main focus (BURN BABY BURN!!!) and I wanted to exagerate his body a lil.
