Troll vs Knight

Something I drew in college classes over the past month here and there.

Dont say anything about anatomy and perspective, I know whats wrong, etc... and plus its kind of hard to fix something when its drawn in pen.

Sorry for the lined paper, tried to remove most of it.
I also attached the original anyways.

+reppy

You should have used more modulated lines to create a centre of interest and also, a little hatching here and there. Right now, people's eyes scramble all over the picture.

But other than that, I like it, it is nice.

Well I refuse shadowing and hatching with pen... I didnt think id actually finish it, it was just for fun then I actually started to like it, lol.

yes, I know that feeling

I think I shall attempt this coloring with a mouse, woot! lol.

I am unable to distinguish much from it...

In the middle theres an armored troll smashing the earth, while a knight on the right is jumping out of the way... with a forest behind it, etc.

Colored somewhat, reduced size, not finished, etc, you know the drill.

His arm looks hawt, really hawt. Did the troll just miss hitting the knight or something like that?

Yeah the knights supposed to be jumping out the way... so hard to tell tho, i cant even tell the knights legs apart that well.

Looks like watercolor. I like it.

<3

I fucked myself over, sigh :/

can't wait to see it's coloring finished!
i love the perspective.. although it may be somewhat.. dizzying

Im never gona finish it. I messed up.