Self portrait

11-02-2006, 10:41 AM	#1
StormrageJunior	Yet another self portrait ! Done for the international self-portrait day at conceptart.org. =)

11-02-2006, 11:02 AM	#2
erwtenpeller	THe color choises are fenomenal, given more time this could be smoothed out to a really good pic. I also love the composition. I'd like to see a bird in the sky though, or a DRAGON RARW.

11-02-2006, 01:35 PM	#3
olofmoleman	<3 the sky + rep

11-02-2006, 06:54 PM

Archian

Quote:

Originally Posted by olofmoleman

<3 the sky

+ rep

I have agree to that

Well done.

EDIT
Oh by the way, + Rep ;)

11-02-2006, 07:09 PM	#5
TDR	Umm...I don't like that bright sun spot, it attracts attention more than the portrait, which is the central piece. Also you have the same saturation and color warmth everywhere and...oh wait...I said I won't comment anymore. Sorry...

11-02-2006, 07:23 PM	#6
Daminon	Indeed you want to look at the light. :)

11-02-2006, 08:24 PM	#7
Shadow_Strike	The light really does draw the eye away, the sky is so nice with its tint of red. I do wish I could draw skies like that. The hair in my opinion lacks depth, it needs stronger darks as it clashes with the bg and the face.

11-02-2006, 08:41 PM	#8
TDR	And where's the nose's shadow? From such a light source there should be sharp shadows. And the hair has the same intensity both in the shade part and in the light part and...oops...here it goes again...sorry :(

11-02-2006, 09:18 PM	#9
Daminon	I'm supprised to see such non-lethal comments from you TDR. XD But I know itäs only a mater of time. 10 december right?

11-02-2006, 09:29 PM	#10
TDR	Yes, you are right. But I will preserve part of this character, it has gotten into me. There are also perspective issues and whooooha, ok I'll stop for good now.

11-02-2006, 09:51 PM

#11

MaD[Lion]

hmm i must agree with TDR tat the shading of this picture isnt tat good, the glass on face should have nice reflection to add more attention, and also the skin. Give everything more contrast. The hair part where it metts sunlight should be brighter, cus if light go trough hair it will illuminate, this will make it more dramatic :D (but ofc u mentioned you should use more time)
The cloud is ok for the colors, but not tat good where the bright lines are, cus it makes them look a flat. (and again u also said u should use more time ^^)

But anyway other than that i really like your nose, nice color and shading :D

11-04-2006, 05:28 AM	#12
Candy_Warlock	I like you.

11-04-2006, 06:45 AM	#13
StormrageJunior	Well, TDR, your behaviour will never cease to amaze me. -.- Thanks for the feedback and input everyone =)

11-06-2006, 03:09 AM	#14
LightKirtar	For the love of god, stop drawing every hair individually.

11-06-2006, 05:52 AM	#15
TDR	Nice to see you back once again, LightKitar :) Please stay longer this time, people here need you, mister (I mean it).