| 11-19-2006, 01:40 PM | #1 |
I just want to know if this water fall scene is a good make |
| 11-19-2006, 01:54 PM | #2 |
Variation of doodads is a good thing, but too much like you have in this is bad. You have included doodads which do not even fit the environment. The mass trees down the side of the waterfall also look pretty bad, their all the same. Makes for a repeated and messy look. Not trying to be harsh but you should probably start over, get some real waterfall pictures to get ideas of what kind of environment you would like to create. |
| 11-19-2006, 01:57 PM | #3 |
I like the use of doodads actually, I just think the waterfall part needs some more love, and fix the overusage of trees on the sides of it. |
| 11-19-2006, 01:59 PM | #4 |
I agree with FinalTyrant |
| 11-19-2006, 02:07 PM | #5 |
thanks for the input guys i will probly start over i just wanted to know how it looked for the first time iv ever tried sumthin like this |
| 11-19-2006, 05:13 PM | #6 |
What about adding some rocks @ the slopes? Also there are some trees without trunks, and custom trees won't look bad there on the slopes. But the rest looks OK :) |
| 11-19-2006, 11:32 PM | #7 |
Bigger and less trees |
| 11-21-2006, 05:16 PM | #8 |
hey guys here is my update |
| 11-21-2006, 09:01 PM | #9 |
plz use the custom waterfall, your whole waterfall is ruined because of the small waves! and make rocks ope out of the waterfall aswell... the sunken ship looks out of place there. either its totally sunken and on the ground of the lake or its not... for the trees, they all have to have the same height and tinting colour, edit that... for the path, make it wind out of side because now you can see where the map ends, if you make it wind left or right and set some trees there it will surely look better there is some big blue mushroom at the centre of the creen, just delete it plz those exactly same swimming wooden boxes look odd aswell maybe you want to use a lot of ice traps for the white at the bottom of the waterfall instead of the bubbles which look like they hover above the water! stick with one rocks variation, delete the one darker rock at the right side of it and spam some more of the normal ones and last but not least try to edit the top of the waterfall, as it is semi transparent there and it looks as if the water flows up to the peak of the muontain (against gravity) just to fall down on the other side... oh, got more than i thought... these are just hints, plz dont be mad at me i think this screen has a potential and could becom nice with some work spent on it! keep it up... |
| 11-21-2006, 11:47 PM | #10 |
Get rid of the giant mushroom, energy field, and bubbles in the water. The color of the waterfall also doesnt blend well with the water in the lake. I could say alot more but I don't have the time to. |
| 12-10-2006, 04:02 AM | #11 |
Looks laggy. |
