Archmage of the Crimson Order

It has been a really REALLY long time since I have done anything in pen; so much so that I couldnt find my old pens and had to go out and buy some new ones. Started testing em out and got more into it and decided to make something. Concept is of a skin I tried to do, but at the time didnt have the skill required to get the armor how I wanted, for Skinning Contest #8 I think it was. Sorry I couldnt make it realistic and include the Blood Mages crappy chest wrap Oh ya and on a side note I messed up on the legs so I incorporated the cloak more and add more shadows.

the arms seem to be a bit odd.. the right one too short, and the left one is popping out of nowhere.

all I see is random scribbling. You should control the pencil, not the other way around.

a note on presentation: crop your image before you post. It has a lot of white everywhere around it. Scanning alone doesnt do the trick.

Moved to CA/FA forum, could eventually be moved back if the image is fixed.

Fixed. Sorry I guess I forgot to crop it after I scanned it.