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Experimental Gem

01-14-2007, 05:50 PM#1
BertTheJasser
Experimental Gem with Photoshop CS. I am not very proud of it, but ... oh well.

Plx give some feedback.. thx.
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01-14-2007, 06:04 PM#2
Dionesiist
I thought it was a model at first...
01-14-2007, 06:17 PM#3
Callahan
It's not so bad but what is this supposed to be?An icon?
01-14-2007, 06:19 PM#4
Daelin
Indeed... I didn't know that concept arts were resources. And never submit something you are not very proud of. It is pretty good though the yellow brush is so obvious. It doesn't look that good. Try to either make some vertical rays out of it or something, because it doesn't look like a ball of light. Or if you plan to make a ball of light, maybe in the interior of the crystal.

~Daelin
01-14-2007, 06:20 PM#5
Naakaloh
Um... did you intend for this to be in the "Submit a Resource" forum?

Except for the light effect... it looks like you just drew straight lines and color-filled. It kinda reminds me of a Christmas ornament with the funny yellow thing on top.
01-15-2007, 01:01 PM#6
Dan van Ohllus
This should be moved into the Art Gallery thread.

Picture looks decent, but lacks of contrasts.
01-15-2007, 04:12 PM#7
erwtenpeller
Comepletely and utterly the wrong forum. In fact, the posting is so far off, i'm giving you a one rep penalty for it.

Not only is this not a recource, this is not even a gallery entry, as you are requesting feedback. The correct forum to post this in is the concept art/fanart forum, and that is where i will move this.
01-15-2007, 04:59 PM#8
BertTheJasser
:? I had to hurry up while posting, so I guess this caused my mistake posting in the wrong forum.

Primary it should had become an icon for a gem, but , as Dan van Ohllus allready mentioned, it does not turn out is I supposed it to do.
01-15-2007, 10:24 PM#9
erwtenpeller
Most importantly it needs more contrast. It needs darker darks, and higher lights. Also, the lighting needs to be more dynamic. Right now it looks like like... Like an wire-iron structure with red paper over it and a dimmed light inside. Like a halloween lantern or something.