Orc Outpost

Some random map that I whip up for an reason.







-Av3n

*shuckles*

i don't like the tileset,and it's RAINING
...and theres a bunch of torches/braziers and a bbq pig with alot of damn fire...wow..

unstoppable fire.

I dont like that mountainside....looks clean and fake. (picture 3) The map seems okay though.

Hmm....

1) Your torches are overtorched. Fire's spilling over the edge and...ugh. Just raise their elevation and/or size em down a bit.

2) Ugh, some of the tiny house modules are all rotating the same way. Specifically seen in the second picture.

3) Mountainside is moot in third picture. Maybe try spraying some grass and trees around? On the mountaintop I mean.

4) Fourth picture looks a bit bare. Nicely made road though. It's important to have variation in the painted terrain, but I don't think you are using enough doodads on that screenshot. There should at least be a few piles of boulders and/or orc house modules.

5) Uh...don't know if this can be helped, but there's too much fog to look into from that perspective. There's also a noticeable overtorching problem with added fire not high enough and too big for the torch it is stacked upon.

i think it looks badass, i like how u stacked buildings, good job


i try to add positive reinforcement so kids dont kill themselves

Don't you know? This place is where all the little kids go to find a reason to die.

The only thing I'd like to add on top of all the other critique is that the road just looks so... odd to me. It looks far too orderly for an army which has a barbaric kind of theme going for them. It somehow goes as straight as an arrow down the path it's supposed to, no little edge pieces missing, never meandering... maybe someone else can look at the Horde, see that road, and say, "Yeah, they did that."

And that's it.

I done this terrain for fun. Maybe I'll learn something from your critics

-Av3n