3 sketches in art

I have horrific luck when drawing Illidan, every attempt i've made I've failed, so I hope this is a bit better, but its still drenched in failure.

Fruit punch XD

Before you start putting that pretty shading on, you really need to stop and wonder if you proportions and stances are somewhere near correct. Mimic them with your own body and a mirrior. Dont by shy, it works.

I know illidan is completely screwed up, i foudn that out before shading but I didn't really care i already messed around with it for a long time trying to get it right :P

I really like the shading though.

Nice shading!

I would have said what erwt said but whats the point in repeating so ill just say that i hate the weapon design in numba 2.
A big guy like that with such flimsy looking claws that also do not make sense of how they are attached beside a bracelet. Very impractical. Also the one on the right does not look possible.

SANSUI!!!!11 i've missed you so much! dunno why lol

thanks for crits

Just learn to draw the eyes, they're a great part of any drawing. They can make or break it.

whats wrong with my eyes :(

the middle one is supposed to have black eyes

Well, its a sphere covered on two sides with skin, not just a small shape. Think of the form in mind when you draw it. Also, if I may add, try upping the contrast and cutting down on those hard contours a bit.

lol my pencil was too thick to really detail the eyes

A) Sharpen your pencil.
B) Shouldda gotten bigger paper.
C) continue and suck.

out of three options to do, you pick the last?

if you don't pick c you are breaking slacker rule 235 never do anything that may involve extra unrequired movements to finish a drawing.