Death of a hero

I plan to have his son and wife in the corner balled up, its supposed to be an orc family being asassinated by the alliance. Nevermind the axe thing :P. I will prolly change face as it looks retarded right now :P

and hes not standing, he's falling after being struck with too many arrows. I will add a few cuts and bruises. Im not sure how to show the alliance, maybe dark forms or the back of their heads or something

Alliance = Evil

Make the arrows bigger and add more coming from the right side of the picture.

mm i dont wanna make the arrows too big. ill ad some comming from the right though.

Second Wip, havent added the arrows to his side yet. Started to build the room.

hmmm....
nice start but, i also think u should make the arrows bigger because now they look like somekind of gnome size arrows...

still struggling with colors i see.

:p yeah i cant help it

If you where going to add a wife and child, its too late now. Its better if you build up the entire picture in your scetch, not do it piece by piece. This is how you get unbalanced compositions.

how is it too late? i can just draw them in the corner

I thought this was gonna be an outdoor scene. Ok the family huddle in a corner could work but then the whole pose is weird.