The Vengance Trailer

03-04-2007, 05:28 PM

The Vengance

Hello there! This is my first cinematic =)

Story:
A peasant stands by his farm and think of old problems, family problems.
For twelve years ago, he's familiy was brutally murdered by Lord Stalithian.
After twelve years, the peasant starts to search for Stalithan.
He want to revenge on him.

Screenshots:

Download Trailer: Trailer.w3x

Attached Images

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	vengance.png (130.6 KB)

Attached Files

trailer.w3x (72.2 KB)

03-09-2007, 07:27 PM	#2
kebabmeat	So what do you think?

03-10-2007, 12:08 PM	#3
rednek	Camera are too chaotic Try to use some fog for better atmosphere Try to put oneself in peasant place, and mainly in place of his family When that murderer trying to kill his famili, they don't do anything, they only stay and wait to death. I don't like dialoges, they are too shortly And mainly It's short and it has no point

03-10-2007, 12:10 PM	#4
kebabmeat	But it is a trailer you know -.- But thank you anyway for your opinion, and for the tips.

03-10-2007, 12:15 PM

rednek

Quote:

Originally Posted by kebabmeat

But it is a trailer you know -.-

That is not excuse, trailer or not, it still need some point and good execution
Yeah and I forgot to music, EVERY cinematic (trailer or not) need music, music music, MUSIC!!!!!111!1!!!1
music == atmosphere
you need atmosphere :)

03-10-2007, 12:20 PM	#6
kebabmeat	Okay, I will add that later, I'm making some doodads models right now, so I'm a lil busy atm =) But as I said before, that you for the tips!

03-10-2007, 08:18 PM	#7
Waldbaer	Hey, for a "first cinematic" this already looks very nice! Well, there is not much to see until now... just one hint: to make long camera sways, you should shorten the waits between the "apply camera" actions at least for 0.2 seconds. Since waits are always longer than requested, you need this adjustment to get a fluent camera sway.

03-11-2007, 12:16 AM	#8
Karzvitch	Just wondering... Is it supposed to be Vengeance or is it really Vengance?

03-11-2007, 09:19 AM	#9
kebabmeat	It should be the Vengeance, but I named it the Vengance, it looks better, but everyone know wut i mean anyway ^^