Handaren Executioner

Wip #1 of my Handaren Executioner. Elite of the Handaren, usualy noble, the Executioners are said to be magical by the handaren. They arent actualy magical, but they are dreadnaughts in combat. They are taught how to behead an enemy in any situation. They also are very inteligent and are usualy from the royal handaren family.

The hand part seems to be too in the front, try moving it backwards and/or moving the human torso to the middle of it... Otherwise, seems cool :)

The human part is meant to be at the wrist

On first it wasn't :P

yeh it was.. the other one had a tail though

They're the same race, right?

Yes.. i suppose i should give this one a tail to :P

anyways, update

white background again? darken up the area around your character and you'll see the colors you used are not as you think they are, since you don't seem to trust what we say. They're actually more desaturated and way brighter than they seem.

Srry, i forgot to do that.. i scanned it :P

Dunno if it's just me, but his ring doesn't seem correct...
besides that, it's nice.

Hes too small for the hand or too off center. He doesn't look the right size as a wrist would be for a hand of that size. He's too far from the thumb but also not far enough back.

thanks for the comments

I Agree, I think hes not far enough back, but his thumb is good legnth away, if u look at a hand its almost as far away as fingers. I wanted the hand to be large compared to the body, even if that means the body is smaller than a normal wrist would be.