Fall of Peace Load Screen

Even if my project has not yet been very finished (Fall of Peace), I couldn't find any other more suitable place to put this in. Need feedback on Load Screen though, basically complete. Needs improvements I think perhaps.

Link.

umm.... that fire is like... ya.....

You think so?

that the Final Tyrant said lol

Looks like pure " ms paint"

no. it's not paint! it's a drop....i dunno wat 2 say....it's plain.....killing my eyes and killing wc3c and yes, killing ur project soon enough

You must've spent entire minutes on that.

Now how about telling him how he can get better instead of keeping on mocking him, eh?

You're welcome to do so but, this deserves to be mocked.

Unless he is like... 8 years old, i see no way that he can be helped. Ever. I just dont know where to start with commenting, you dont constructively critisize the drawings of your 4-year-old sister either, you just nod and say "nice", you dont ask why dad has six fingers.

Moved out of the gallery.

I never was good at drawing fire :(
And yes, the blurriness does kill my eyes.
Looked good when I was drawing it :(
Erase the flames? Or how would I properly draw fire? Meh.

I'd suggest you to search some tuts for making fire in whatever program you use in google.