| 06-19-2007, 11:08 PM | #1 |
Did this while the site was down for school. Yes it is a bit monotone but I will make sure to try not to do that on my next artwork. |
| 06-19-2007, 11:57 PM | #2 |
I like the coloring and the sword, but it looks extremely flat, you need more shading.. and not just darkening the shading you have now, i mean making one side darker than the other. Overall, I like :) |
| 06-20-2007, 10:34 PM | #3 |
like i said before MORE DEPTH |
| 06-21-2007, 01:50 AM | #4 | |
Quote:
If so then no need to be repetitive. Or shout for that matter. |
| 06-22-2007, 06:11 PM | #5 |
Theres a lot of anatomical perspective issues in this, the legs looking bend in a strange way and his hand being odd. The way you render your images is nice, looks really smooth, but you could work more on composition. I simply suggest you make more scetches, fuck around with imaging a lot, dont attempt to get stuff right right away. |
| 06-22-2007, 11:14 PM | #6 |
Ok will do :) I had just made this as a sketch then I realised I had to do something for school so I colored it. And ya I couldnt quite get the supid legs to work properly. |
| 06-23-2007, 09:57 PM | #7 | |
Quote:
|
| 06-24-2007, 05:33 AM | #8 |
I wasnt using very good paper and erasing marks have been a curse upon me for some time. I have been trying to cut down on it. But I could have erased it in my art program and redid it but the thought only slightly crossed my mind. Was a bit scatterbrained at the time with finals and all ![]() |
