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Tavir

06-28-2007, 03:31 PM#1
rednek
Tavir is little joyful creature, alike with fox. He live in dark forests of Koliana and he is very favourite there, becouse he is peaceful and he like humans. He tend to join good wayfarer and beg for food or just flaunt himself. He maintain oneself
with meat he will snag or snack that he will stole or beg from wayfarers...

NOTE: It's creature for my project (Koliana, that's name of world). I don't work on it now. I will start when I will be better in drawing and animating. I just need some practice :P

Criticism will be fine ^^
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06-28-2007, 06:48 PM#2
Callahan
the stump look like a plane.
06-28-2007, 07:02 PM#3
rednek
Question of your 3D view, but yes. The light is comming from up, and I dunno where I should draw shadows ^^
They are under roots and some wrinkles
thanks for your criticism anyway :3
06-28-2007, 07:22 PM#4
erwtenpeller
Verry complete.
06-28-2007, 07:31 PM#5
rednek
Thanks :p
06-28-2007, 08:25 PM#6
Game_Slave
i really like the light environment, the stump, and the leaves at the top, the fox is crap though
06-28-2007, 08:31 PM#7
rednek
And another thanks to you :3 fox has kinda weird anatomy, I was draw it only from my (delirious) mind so that's why ^^
EDITED: but I am proud on that fur :D
06-29-2007, 04:13 AM#8
Rinpun
Wow, I love the environment (especially the tops of the trees & the stump). Unique style, too. The fox itself, I'm sure you've noticed, has good fur, but is very flat-looking and has a totally screwed up face.
06-29-2007, 10:00 AM#9
rednek
thanks thanks thanks :P
well, project has more cartoon drawing style, and fox is good in cartoon graphic. But this image has realistic style, and fox is strange there :-\
06-29-2007, 10:42 AM#10
Born²Modificate
I like the style and the choice of colours. :)
A very nice picture.
06-29-2007, 12:34 PM#11
rednek
thanks (also thanks for rep)
06-29-2007, 03:54 PM#12
TDR
I don't like it one bit actually. It has no atmosphere, no depth, and the colors don't prove me anything. Also the technique isn't great. So instead of repeating myself over and over again with the same advice, I thought I'd do something different this time (I hope you don't mind): I painted quickly over your painting to illustrate what I think that it could have made it better. Place your cursor on the image to see your image behind and compare. It's my opinion anyway.

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06-29-2007, 04:49 PM#13
Callahan
it's different...lesser cartoony and mor realistic.
btw i've learnt a new command: the image flip.
06-29-2007, 05:43 PM#14
rednek
Your version is thousand times better, now I don't like mine version :(
But I get the point and I will do my best to be better :P
+rep

(now just learn how to use brushes to make it like that... Is there any good tutorial for it or I just need more practice?)
06-29-2007, 05:48 PM#15
TDR
practice all brushes and play with their features until you get what you like.

Oh and what I forgot to mention that's very important: white is never white. It catches all colors that are around it, unless it's under direct sunlight. But even then it's not pure white, like RGB 255,255,255, it's like 242,242,242 or something.