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08-22-2007, 01:38 AM#1
darkwulfv
My Icon Gallery

If there's a forum this belongs under, move it there, 'cause I didn't see one for icons. Anyways, I JUST started computer graphic art, using only a mouse, The GIMP, and my brain. So, I finally finished my first icon. Since it's only a 64x64, I don't have a tablet, and my art skills are quite lacking, don't expect Picasso-type work please.

First icon: Chaos Barrage
(Idea:) An array of firey, chaos meteors (hence why they're green). This one took me about 1 1/2 hours to make, since I kept redoing a lot of things.

Second icon: Chaos Constriction
(Idea:) Basically, just anything involving constriction. I considered ropes, handcuffs, and "iron" bars, but I decided chains in the end. This is still a WIP, so anything you suggest will be nice.

Third icon: Lightning Thrust
(Idea:) Lightning. Lots of static and force. I don't like this one as much, it seems too 2d, but im not sure what i can do to change that.

All I ask is that anyone who finds the time to look, offer suggestions on where I need improvement, and what could use improvement/additions in the icon(s). Like I said, if there is a proper forum for this, move it there, 'cause I wasn't sure what icons were considered. (2d art seemed to be focused on skinning.) If my work isn't hated, then I'll update this thread as I go. Thanks for anyone's help!

~Darkwulfv
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08-22-2007, 05:54 AM#2
Tide-Arc Ephemera
They all look too basic... like no filters, nothing... but that's my opinion.

http://www.wc3campaigns.net/resources.php?f=635 - You can post Icons and/or interfaces there.
08-22-2007, 08:00 AM#3
olofmoleman
They look too much like pixel art, no subtle gradients.

And it needs a lot more work before it can be submitted as resource.

It should be moved to the WIP textures forum.
08-22-2007, 08:14 AM#4
darkwulfv
I had no intentions of submitting them as resources, for one. Even I know they look basic. I was just looking for opinions, so I can improve right off the bat.

Quote:
Originally Posted by olofmoleman
They look too much like pixel art, no subtle gradients.
Alright, I'm stupid so bear with me. What're you referring to?

Oh, and thanks for posting. Once I figure out what you're referring to, I'll get right to work on them. Like I said, these are only my first 3, and I barely know about any of the tools/options GIMP has to offer, but I'll work on it.

EDIT: I worked on Chaos Barrage a little. Yes, smudge is evil, but I couldn't help smudging the meteor trails, it made a nice speed/blur effect.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Tide-Arc Ephemera
They all look too basic... like no filters, nothing... but that's my opinion.
I've looked through every filter, and none of them were appropriate for Chaos Barrage (it's the only one I checked so far). They don't look fitting for the others, either. But, hell, who knows.

Anyways, I'll be moving this thread to the thread area Tide-Arc mentioned, so if you want to continue helping me, go there. Thanks!
(link: My Icons)