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08-24-2007, 08:40 PM#1
sansui
Yea, completely related to wc3.
Anyway's since I cant get feedback anywhere else... Crits and Comments please.
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08-25-2007, 02:37 AM#2
Jaakko
It looks really good. I like those colours in the hair.
08-26-2007, 12:31 PM#3
Kurjuus
Very well placement of the features and coloring here. There's nothing wrong with the general shape of the features itself, but unfortunately you have some issues in giving some of them the right volum. In other words, you put the shadows and highlights not quite right on some places. These would be especially the lips, they look pretty flat, the nose which needs some more contrast at the side of the vidsible nostril and the area around the eye, especially the eylids. All of this since the light source seems to be placed to the left a bit over the middle of the pic and zoomed out. Furthermore the eyes lack some interest, by which I mean lack of texturing on the iris and the brownisch lashes which should have a rather dark hue, and should be at least a little longer due to the perspective.

But actually the biggest problem with the image is the overall blurryness, which is out of place at the point of interest, which would be the girl itself. While the face isn't too blurry to deem its blurryness as a great issue the hair is. you should have at least made the block of hair that covers a part of the face more detailed and, most important, sharper. Also the brushes was quite to bit you painted teh single strands with and compared to the tidy shade of the hair those look very strange
08-26-2007, 01:37 PM#4
TDR
yo hateware, what's up? what happened to your hateware account? sorry for the off topic...now to get back on topic, hatey is basically right...pretty much lacks volume.