Little Red 01

I dunno if this fits as "concept" art but here's a page of Little Red. I heard that drawing a story is VERY different from an illustration and can help you improve. So this is basically just a drawing in a story format, I doubt I'll be continuing this .The drawing is mostly with inks and markers since I don't want to stick my hand into digital stuff too much. Tell me what you think. :) bout text placements, fonts, frames, storyboard, style, etc.

Would fit for a beginning of a comic.

A nude lady waking up in a forest? I'm already interested in this comic lol
The forest in that last pic needs work though. Kinda looks sloppy in areas and I think there needs to be more detail in the enviroment. Everything else is great though :)
~Craka_J

If you were to continue it, it would be great!

What I think:
text placements: Unfortunately, because of the little text there actually is, I cant say much, but what I can say is that so far it looks very nice.

fonts: I like the font, its gentle and fluent and I could read it for a long time. Some manga I've read tend to have harsh fonts that strain your eyes after reading for a long period of time, and this looks like the font of Love Hina, so I would love to read it.

frames: The frames are good, although, they could be darker.

storyboard: The way it is set out is great, again, reminds me of many other manga and so I approve of it. Also, its great how when there is confusion, at the very beginning, lots of things are going on. You did very well here.

style: I like your style of setting out. It reminds me of Love Hina, and I love Love Hina, so thats a good thing. Also your pen work is fantastic, how you detail her very well, but unfamiliar places less so which to me shows uncertainty.

Very well done in all of this (btw, I enjoy English at school, thats why I am analytical).

If you were to make more, I would certainly read them. +Rep

where are the nipples?

word.

Seconded.

looks good

yeah, but...nipples

Japan girls no nipples.

erwt no english?

I dunno, her lying pose looks a little awkward.

I may be a little blind, but it took me too long to work out where the bottom arm was going/coming from. =/

Well balanced with the top frames. The bottom one, you might want to detail her more.