Me tries a face

I felt that I wanted to learn how to make faces so I found some simple tutorial and started. No need to tell doesnn't look much of a human face... What I want help with there is toplogy. I try to stick to the idea of loops around the eyes and mouth instead of all squarey but that's really hard to make good. Could someone paint some lines on the pictures or something to show how it could be made better.

Did you ever draw a human head? I mean like a study, spend hours on a portrait, be it life study (preferably) or photo. If not, then don't expect to make a good model of it. If you don't know and feel what you're doing it's useless. If yes, then ok but you sure don't show it. Topology is not even as close as important to that. But if you really want this, I'll make some paitover stuff but maybe tomorrow, now I want to sleep.

Two suggestions:

1) That head is way too thin. My jaw alone is thicker than my neck (it is different on more muscular necks, but I have NEVER seen a head like that one).

2) Your eyes are a bit too high I think. They need to be closer to the center of the head.

(O,o) Well yes please draw some simple thing. No one declines help offered from TDR.

Or you could use the web and find some references to study...