Peace?

Im making a cinematic about a duel between 2 swordsman. Here is the shot of the simple terrain/scene tat they will duel in. Wanted it to be like art...

Very nice :) Congratulations

yeah, looks almost like World of Fartcraft

dont compare my work to tat crap game ^^ even tho it do sometimes have nice landscape

Very nice, but I would suggest darkening the grass to match the grass terrain. Just try it and see if you like it, because right now it's like, "Why is the standing up grass so much lighter?"



Edit: Don't darken it to exactly match though, and it really does look nice.

check the hill in the top left of the pic, looks a bit empty, some grass or stones would do.

I agree, that hill over there is way too plain, and the landscape terrain grass looks a lil' too dark, or the grass doodads are too bright.

well this is artistical terrain, not really realistic, in beginning it was even total red grass, but couldnt find red grass tile so i put it green :P

the hill to left is plain ye, i was just painting it with trees quick. But also in a cinematic u wont notice it much, since ur attention would be taken with the motion

I like your how the whole thing looks. Can you tell me where you get some of those doodads. I havn't terrained in awhile but I notice everyone is using imports now.

One thing you could do to add a lot more detail to your fight scene is: Where you have the grass tileset, replace that with the grass doodads but make it's 'Z' smaller than your originally already grass doodad and maybe tint it darker. Maybe that will bring more focus on the scene and away from the background as you were going for. Then again maybe it will look bad, maybe I should try it and look at it before suggesting it to you .

it already lag a bit with the trees in background, i think more grass will make it lag more. so i will just use perspective trick.
The doodads were included in the ultimate terraining map, just download it and its all tere for use.

atm im looking for nice character model ^^

You should darken the grass a bit or make it less yellow.
Otherwise nice work.