The Seduction

Ehh.. doing it for a school project + experience. I suck at woman so she is ugly, though I am proud of it.

The pose is interesting and the lighting and details are excellent. the proportions just seem a little blocky, but hey i suppose thats more realistic

Thanks, I'll post an updated version soon.

ZOMG huge ass!! O.o

lol :P

If I were you I would go over the hair first before adding anything else :P
It definitly needs some highlights. Also, despite of me knowing that it is still wip, the fingers on the right hand tearing the heart are very wrong
you can't possibly stress them like that naturally and the light that falls on them doesn't make them look like they're in the right angle.

Thanks for comments.

PS: The hands ripping the heart appart aren't from the same person. It is a metaphoric drawing.

You're falco?? wth

Why the is werewulf talkin through earth-fury... WTH

Please make the background another color... :D

Ehh.. for printing reasons white is where it stays. I got to edit a bit more due to request from teacher but I am desolate of motivation.

I think her ass area looks weird. Looks like a vertical ellipse while it should be more like an horizontal oval. Ionno if you get it...

Actually the whole pose is awkward in this perspective :P it looks like she has her legs a bit to the right of the body, so now tell me who the fuck that feels like her face looks would do that. Right, those who wanna feel even more unconfortable xD