| 01-29-2008, 12:30 AM | #1 |
Download my two minute horror cinematic here: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/resource...l%20Frenzy.w3x |
| 01-29-2008, 12:47 AM | #2 |
Downloading, will edit post with comment afterwards. Semi edit: If you want to remove the racial border around the "transmition from unit" face, go to "Image - Game Menu Border" and set it to "UI\Widgets\EscMenu\Human\blank-background.blp" Movie comment: I found it very intense and engulfing. Saw some tiny minor errors in grammar here and there, but no big deal. Nice effects, environment and voice acting wasn't bad either. Though there was at some point (could've been because of my headset) that the sound started tearing. 9/10 - Terrain (Environment) 8/10 - Sound (Music/Sound FX/Voice) ?/10 - Story (Was too short to get anything out of it) 10/10 - Directing (Camera angles and movement. Also well timed fade-to-blacks) So i'd say 8/10 total, for being too short. I think this is worth working on, you have a great start. |
| 01-29-2008, 11:08 AM | #3 |
flat story, but I loled anyways :D Put more people in the church at the beginning. Now it looks like 3 people total are listening to the priest. |