Snake and Eagle!

Huzzah every1s dead

Looks interesting so far.

Not quite sure what to say about the styling besides that it conveys the movement rather well.

The style is just to emphasize the movement, and it achieves it purpose, the problem is if it's used in 24 pages of comics, it can tire the eyes.

My suggestions: thiner lines. More work, but I think the movement will look more interesting. GOGO my hottie Candy :)

Snake? Snake? Snaaaakee!!!

I like it, its hard to see where the ground is, or where up is. But it doesnt matter as much.
The guy in the first panel reminds me of "the lord", from old Wc3c.