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06-16-2004, 05:14 PM#1
Marco Polaris
Here's a demon I invented over a year ago, revamped. Maybe I'll enter him in MC2's next season.

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No time to add more, I'm afraid.

[edit]: And, now I do. That was quick, huh?

Basically, the Razghast is a stronger, solitary version of the Fel Hound, created by the corrupted Highborne of Azeroth's first age as the superior mount. The creature feeds on magic, like a Fel Hound, but instead of fissioning when it has absorbed enough, it merely continues to grow. This arcane-influenced growth, of course, fades away over time. Not only does the Razghast suck the magic out of its foes, it automatically absorbs any spells cast at itself, using them to heal itself. Isn't it a darling?
06-16-2004, 05:21 PM#2
LegnaKrad
Looks sweet. Kinda resembles a wyvern. Only crit is that it doesn't look like its looking at the guys killing. Don't know if that was done on purpose, its just that usually when one kills something they look at, hah. Again though, looks very cool.
06-16-2004, 05:23 PM#3
Muoteck
Thats really original concept. I find nothing i could really crit... Although elf looks like he's retarded o_O
06-16-2004, 09:35 PM#4
Shadow_Strike
i think its tounges could be a girls best 'friend'...
but then again... errr

fix up some text, i cant barely read it
06-17-2004, 08:29 AM#5
Saboera
well thats freakin great as always but i agree with muo, the elf face look retarted and he kinda look like a miget too, maybe like a half-elf half-dwarf =P just giving u some crits, tough i may be wrong and im kidding about that half-elf thing -_-'
06-17-2004, 08:47 AM#6
AlexBS
the elf is awesome. shut up. except for his short legs. that facial expression is teh bomb. at first i thought he was poking the critter with his staff like he was trying to sell it, saying the nonretractable claws as a sales pitch... then i saw the tetacle around him, lol
06-17-2004, 02:34 PM#7
theravenguard
Quote:
Originally Posted by Muoteck
Thats really original concept. I find nothing i could really crit... Although elf looks like he's retarded o_O

It's an elf what's you expect ;).

...Also, that elf is screwed. Nice work.
06-17-2004, 03:42 PM#8
`deathlegionare
Quote:
Originally Posted by theravenguard
It's an elf what's you expect ;).

...Also, that elf is screwed. Nice work.

so wait, your saying all elves are retarded?

anywhoo... cool demon but then its seems like its lacking some action or something.

shouldn't the elf try and fight back with his puny staff?
06-17-2004, 05:27 PM#9
Moon_Lunatic
Looks really good, the only crit I can give is the arm shell seems kinda out of place. Good job.
06-18-2004, 01:33 AM#10
Lord_Derrag
Nice,i have to agree w/ muoteck the guy looks a little retarded.The demon,i dont have anything to complain about.The writing on the other hand...is unredable...All i gots ta' say is work on the humanoid facial structure if u r gonna draw something humanoid...Other wise it's an excellent drawing!
06-18-2004, 01:47 AM#11
icbm1987
Quote:
Originally Posted by Shadow_Strike
i think its tounges could be a girls best 'friend'...
but then again... errr

NOT HERE!

And that's great Marco... I saw it in your gallery earlier... but I don't think I made a comment.

The elf is fine... Marco just draws them with large heads.

I don't think that location for the wings would be very good... the upper body would just dangle... unless it has an extreme amount of muscular strength.

It would be nice if you added some of the Felhounds trademark "living spines"

but other than that... very nice.

icbm1987
06-19-2004, 07:52 PM#12
Marco Polaris
A small note on the elven retardedness - I was going for 'gaunt' since the razghast is draining his magical energies. Sorry my penmanship can't be read there - the pencil I was using was a little light on the graphite, I suppose.

Well, here's all the stuff the footnotes point out.

The claws are not retractable like a cat's - the resemblance seems to be merely superficial.

The 'lower jaw' of the mouth is actually two seperate bones that spread apart when the mouth opens, creating one of those triangle-like maws that you see on "Tremors II" and the like.

The three 'tongues' can absorb magical energy.

The forearms are covered in chitinous plates.

It has a worm-like tail and the neck and stomach can expand to consume more prey - it can live on meat if it has to.

Sorry for the delay, and thanks for the replies.
06-23-2004, 12:27 PM#13
Arching Blades
Is the elf losing consciousness? Looks like it... I think first thing he would have done is to drop his staff, wouldn't he? Other than that, nothing more to point out.
06-23-2004, 10:06 PM#14
Xatoga
Yeah, I think the elf is getting his mana and life sucked out or something. Other than his legs kinda short(Its Toulouse-Lautrec the elf), he's fine. And the monster (which is supposed to be the main thing although we're all talking about the elf) is awsome. Really origional, in a good way. 10/10!
06-23-2004, 10:24 PM#15
icbm1987
The Beast should go to his new home .

icbm1987